A long time ago there was a girl called Ashley she loved riding horses but horses weren't cool enough for her so then she found a dog at a pet store and she fell in love she had so many dreams to do with the dog and she called the dog Sadie and then she had this one particular dream which was to go to outer space on the dog but Sadie was to small to ride on the dog so she bought a big ray which can turn a small thing to big thing from a shop and used it on her dog but after she made Sadie bigger she realised
that dogs can’t fly so then she had to go to the store again to buy a flying potion and when she fed the dog she poured the potion in the meat and then the next morning she took Sadie for a ride but it was a bit hard for her because she needed practise of course so it took her about a week and then one day she finally could go to outer space
To be continued
i didn't get to finish so what do you think i should change in my picture and what should happen next.
