My tips for quality comments

today I was learning about on how you make a quality blog comment and we had used Comix to explain on how to make a quality blog comment and this is what I came up with. I think this was quite fun because I enjoy making comics. what do you think of my quality blog comment? do you think I should change?

Our Envorinment

We have been learning about pollution and what will happen to our planet if we don't stop the pollution. We did a piece of writing to reflect this learning.

I am writing this story about what earth might be in the future if we keep on damaging our environment because we are using so much plastic and then when we throw it away it rather gets dumped in the sea or buried in the grounds but first before it gets buried in the ground it has to turn into small pieces of plastic which is really bad for the environment because then it kills plants  and when we eat the animals and they might have eaten the plastic then we are eating plastic too and do you want to be eating plastic because I know definitely don’t so please stop making plastic. Did you know that we could probably cover the whole entire world with plastic .In the future our trees will die and that is really bad because the trees make carbon dioxide into oxygen is that cool or what. We can make packaging that can dissolve in room temperature.

 What do you think will happen in the future if pollution does not stop?