Hello Daisi, I how you described when you swish your hips it makes a swish sound. Great effort maybe next time you should try explain how to make a piupiu. Have you checked when you should use commas?
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Hello Daisi, I how you described when you swish your hips it makes a swish sound. Great effort maybe next time you should try explain how to make a piupiu. Have you checked when you should use commas?
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