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Tuesday, 23 July 2019

What I did in the holidays while my parents were at work...



Today my class was learning that you can post something before it is finished. I thought this was very cool to learn.what did you think of my presentation and do you think I should add anything else?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Daisi-Mae it is Renny from Kaniere school. I like how you said what you did first, second, and last. I think you should try to remember to put a captlie letter for names. I love your writting.

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  2. Hi Daisi-mae it is Lucy from kaniere school. I have woched toy story 4 before and it was cool. I think that you need to chek your slide before you publish it because I notest that you mist out a captle leter. How was the movie? I hope you liked the movie.👍

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