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Why we need a canteen

 4th August 2021

Principal

Papakura central school

23 ray small drive

4th August 2021

Dear principal,

I am writing to you to ask you to please give us a canteen and here are my reasons.

Reason 1 if you do not have enough food. I think we need a canteen because some kids may not have a lot of food at home and then they will not have enough energy to last the whole day but if we have a canteen they can feel less hungry and be more present.

Reason 2 to help you get healthier. The reason why i believe we should have a canteen is because it can help people get healthy/balanced diet. There could be some "unhealthy" food but you can make rules like 2 fruit and veg.

Reason 3 good money. You can make quite good money from the food depending on how much you price it and how popular it is.

Yours sincerely,

Daisi-Mae


1 comment:

  1. Well done Daisi- Mae for completing your persuasive letter. I can see you have followed the format of the letter. Good job!

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